From the feedback in the crit it became apparent that although the idea looked good the whole meaning and concept behind it wasnt really strong enough, i decided to work back into the idea and try and play with the shape of the temple, for instance making the sides of the temple look like the curves of a woman to try and add more meaning and understanding to the idea.
This idea below was a quick concept i sketched that would maybe add a different twist to the design , adding a humour element to it by displaying boobs to look like the tops of the temple but i dont really think this is appropriate enough really.
Initial sketch that I decided to develop...based around the concept that your body is a temple and using type as image to portray this.
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